Friday Haiku Posted by Anna 2 distant thunder stills birdsong summer heavy air Friday Haiku Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
I like the last line, a lot – transposing the usual order (heavy summer) makes the phrase sink, heavily, from the first word to the second, and then “air” is the exhalation. Wonderful! Reply
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I like the last line, a lot – transposing the usual order (heavy summer) makes the phrase sink, heavily, from the first word to the second, and then “air” is the exhalation. Wonderful!
neat.