on the greening hill
a stag steps gingerly across old snow
winter’s crust, broken
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on the greening hill
a stag steps gingerly across old snow
winter’s crust, broken
Knit-Write 
Oh, that’s lovely. A great reminder of the power of just a few, perfectly chosen words.
Pretty.
I like “crust, broken.”
It’s visual and auditory – nice.
Crisp, clean. Excellent picture.
a haiku is not 5, 10, 5 its 5, 7 , 5 on each line